Adeline Foster

Gold Star - 8,907 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

, -Lies - Poem by Adeline Foster

-Lies

Here - here is the blade.
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Topic(s) of this poem: humor


Poet's Notes about The Poem

The 'is' stands.
Few if any may realize where this came from.
©Copyright Adeline Foster

Comments about , -Lies by Adeline Foster

  • Daniel Brick Daniel Brick (3/19/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    The word that popped into my mind as I read this poem is not a common one: it's trenchant. This is especially true for the stabbing which begins the poem - it's an amazing eye of the beholder description of the act, which shows how non-responsive this person who lies truly is. The second stanza has some knotty constructions but they fit the poem perfectly! The speaker expresses her triumph with quiet confidence. This poem excels in coiled energy. (Report) Reply

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  • Kelvin Owusu Kelvin Owusu (10/18/2013 4:59:00 AM)

    interesting read i must say a nice write (Report) Reply

  • Joanna Pavlides Joanna Pavlides (12/19/2012 4:53:00 PM)

    I have read some of your poems. fantastic and very inspirational! xx (Report) Reply

  • Alon Dy Alon Dy (8/23/2012 11:39:00 AM)

    Adeline I like much your poem here. beautiful delivery.Kindly guide me through to my other poems. Just check if they are all right.Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Katheryn Foley (5/19/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    very nice! You are an excellent poet! :) (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Kuetsinya Daniel Kuetsinya (5/19/2012 2:31:00 PM)

    Wow lies, I really like this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Liliana Roman (3/16/2012 7:17:00 PM)

    fabulos poem. i here the bluntness and truth in it. (Report) Reply

  • J.b. Lebuert J.b. Lebuert (2/23/2012 1:23:00 PM)

    Very nice adeline - the is doesn't bother me at all - it fits (Report) Reply

  • Stefanie Fontker (10/19/2011 5:17:00 PM)

    Powerful, chaotic and cutting. This is pure beauty, in the form of words. (Report) Reply

  • Stan Petrovich (8/22/2011 8:30:00 PM)

    Can't help pondering the Poe referencences. But, in my estimation, this was better thsan Poe himself! (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (8/19/2011 1:10:00 PM)

    See now this strength - do I not wear it well?
    Very deep and very impact of revenge here.Killer instinct well served in poetry of blades.Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (9/18/2009 1:52:00 PM)

    I hope I understood it.Try 'Somewhere'. (Report) Reply










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