Lie With Me Poem by Valerie Dohren
Lie With Me
Lie with me
in a golden field of sun-ripened corn
beneath a beckoning sky
We shall listen to the gentle breeze
rising and falling, rising and falling
in sweet crescendos
synchronised with our love –
whispering, whispering
Lie with me
we shall seal our togetherness
with moistened lips
and eager breaths
before the falling of the sun
and the coming of the mellowing night
Surrendering dark for a fresh hope, that what your poem sounds...so gently come and convinced heart to calm Val_Soul
It is a romantic flutter of high intensity love...... Hope there is oasis in the desert of this love and mere mirages won`t still seduce the tender love.
oh my! how wonderful, every time i read your poem i feel like i have flow to the heaven and angels are singing a breathtaking melody....amazing mam bravo
a beautiful write gentle and sweet feeling to it. love this write
Ah! Free verse that says something with great sweetness and purity.A body with soul. So beautiful in expression. If you can can do this well without rhyme, so let it be. WORTH AN 11
As only a poet can paint with words the intense feeling of Love. Very beautiful, Val
exquisitely executed piece beautiful and tender by turns 10/10 Thanks for sharing BB : O)
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I would like to translate this poem
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this is love wonderful simple love