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(13 January 1947 / Southport)

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Lie With Me

Lie with me
in a golden field of sun-ripened corn
beneath a beckoning sky

We shall listen to the gentle breeze
rising and falling, rising and falling
in sweet crescendos
synchronised with our love –

whispering, whispering

Lie with me
we shall seal our togetherness
with moistened lips
and eager breaths

before the falling of the sun
and the coming of the mellowing night

Submitted: Sunday, May 12, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013

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  • Heather Wilkins (6/11/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    a beautiful write gentle and sweet feeling to it. love this write

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  • Owain Glyn (5/26/2013 1:53:00 PM)

    What beautiful quiet images.

  • Joseph Anderson (5/24/2013 12:37:00 PM)

    Ah! Free verse that says something with great sweetness and purity.A body with soul.
    So beautiful in expression. If you can can do this well without rhyme, so let it be.
    WORTH AN 11

  • Sandra Feldman (5/24/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    As only a poet can paint with words the intense feeling of Love. Very beautiful, Val

  • Paul Brookes (5/16/2013 3:06:00 PM)

    exquisitely executed piece beautiful and tender by turns 10/10 Thanks for sharing BB : O)

  • Search 2 (5/15/2013 7:50:00 PM)

    It is a romantic flutter of high intensity love......
    Hope there is oasis in the desert of this love and mere mirages won`t still seduce the tender love.

  • Vipins Puthooran (5/14/2013 4:04:00 PM)

    Superb! ! ! ! Top markssss

  • Diane Hine (5/14/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    Celebration of love - a delicate touch!

  • Unwritten Soul (5/14/2013 5:54:00 AM)

    Surrendering dark for a fresh hope, that what your poem gently come and convinced heart to calm Val_Soul

  • Kelvin Owusu (5/14/2013 2:33:00 AM)

    this is love wonderful simple love

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