Liberty! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Liberty!

Rating: 4.0


You can savour my poem
In a hot or in a cold way
In a sweet or in a sour way
In a meaningful or in funny way
The choice is left to you to have tea with or without sugar!

Your comments can come to me in any way
Now its the time for me to relish them in
The way I want them to be.

We are liberal to one another
We never forces one another to savour poems or
comments in any particular way.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
©2014

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 17 February 2014

liberal to one another, good one, I like it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 17 February 2014

I think comments are generally encouraging to the poet.

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Shraddha The Poetess 19 February 2014

nice one......mam............

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Rajesh Thankappan 19 February 2014

The choice is left to you to have tea with or without sugar! Yes the choice is definitely ours if one is not a diabetic. A nice tongue in cheek poem. [

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Sandra Feldman 19 February 2014

True Liberty of thought and spirit. The way it should be. Very nice! Originally said, with flair

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2014

comments do not arise if it was not to surprise poet himself for poem

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Ramesh Rai 27 February 2014

Thank you so much Geethaji. we need no invitation for the noble cause. God has given us only 24 hours otherwise we all are eager for one another. I am personally grateful to all who are sparing their most valuable time for one another despite of their tight programme of day todays life. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 February 2014

Yeah..that's true.One even can't be forced to give comments at all, just read the poem and forget.Very nice.

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Amitava Sur 24 February 2014

Very true, liberty of thoughts with liberty to write is one of the basic rights. Now how others will take and what they'll comment, it's upto them only.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 February 2014

Freedom of speech and thought........one is at liberty to air his or her views sensibly......Geetha......nice proposition

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