Geetha Jayakumar

Silver Star - 7,536 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Liberty!


You can savour my poem
In a hot or in a cold way
In a sweet or in a sour way
In a meaningful or in funny way
The choice is left to you to have tea with or without sugar!

Your comments can come to me in any way
Now its the time for me to relish them in
The way I want them to be.

We are liberal to one another
We never forces one another to savour poems or
comments in any particular way.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
©2014

Submitted: Monday, February 17, 2014
Edited: Monday, February 17, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 26,524 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/24/2014 10:25:00 AM)

    comments do not arise
    if it was not to surprise
    poet himself for poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,774 Points Ramesh Rai (2/27/2014 9:13:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Geethaji. we need no invitation for the noble cause. God has given us only 24 hours otherwise we all are eager for one another. I am personally grateful to all who are sparing their most valuable time for one another despite of their tight programme of day todays life. Thank you so much for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,032 Points Tiku . (2/27/2014 6:09:00 AM)

    Yeah..that's true.One even can't be forced to give comments at all, just read the poem and forget.Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,676 Points Amitava Sur (2/24/2014 5:52:00 AM)

    Very true, liberty of thoughts with liberty to write is one of the basic rights. Now how others will take and what they'll comment, it's upto them only. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,316 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/19/2014 11:10:00 PM)

    Freedom of speech and thought........one is at liberty to air his or her views sensibly......Geetha......nice proposition (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,243 Points Sandra Feldman (2/19/2014 1:56:00 PM)

    True Liberty of thought and spirit. The way it should be.
    Very nice! Originally said, with flair (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,324 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/19/2014 7:23:00 AM)

    The choice is left to you to have tea with or without sugar!

    Yes the choice is definitely ours if one is not a diabetic. A nice tongue in cheek poem.























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  • Rookie - 17 Points Shraddha The Poetess (2/19/2014 6:42:00 AM)

    nice one......mam............ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,667 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/17/2014 10:27:00 AM)

    I think comments are generally encouraging to the poet. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,319 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/17/2014 6:58:00 AM)

    liberal to one another, good one, I like it. (Report) Reply

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