Liberally Permit Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Liberally Permit

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I was crying foul but proved incorrect
I was told to be patient and advised to act
In line with others and shun the reality
This was almost to be done with sincerity

Poets here are well behaved and mannered
Read articles only of those who are favored
Go after nothing but only on praised lines
Hardly one or two read and put on side lines

I beg them to be strictly real
Let there be looked as no deal
Why best articles are not read and commented?
Is the fault of readers who still think of being tormented?

Why someone should be leniently viewed?
If he is to be guided properly and screwed
That gives him enough of room to justify
Improve in writing and satisfy

I think this is real objective
One can not afford to be selective
Gender discrimination may be there
But we are strictly readers here

One of the main misconceptions here is about collection
The readers must have liberal mind if someone is keen on adoption
Those pictures help in presenting correct picture
Unless they are used to malign and torture

Keep those pictures under utmost secrecy
Give clear instruction and restrict entry
There is nothing wrong if you liberally permit
For use in poems and willingly greet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Sean Spencer12 minutes ago I had a bit of trouble following it, just because of you're writing style, but unless I completely missed the point then I think you had some good points. it seemed to me you were saying that although we all come to this page to share with each other, we also hvae to be sure we don't baby one another. If a poet is to improve, we have to be shown what we're doing wrong. So if that's what you meant, then I totally agree! Comment +1 Better think twice.

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I was crying foul but proved incorrect I was told to be patient and advised to act

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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