Letter From The Battlefield-01 Poem by kafil uddin raihan.

Letter From The Battlefield-01

Rating: 5.0


Dear little angel,
Do you know me?
I am your poor father,
While you are wondering
At the first sight in this world,
Then I am hiding myself
In the dusty noisy banker,
I know you are wondering why,
But dear it is only for you,
For you lovely mama,
For our better future,
I want you grow up in a new home,
Where no fear, no tear in your eyes,
Only smile will enlighten you.
For this reason I am fighting here,
With my last breath, my last dropp of blood,
I will try for a true earth, dear for you.
Wait for me sweet heart,
I am coming soon, to see your smile,
To hold you in my hard arms.
And then I swear, we will move away,
Far away from all of these,
There will be none to irritate us,
Only you, me and your mama,
And the beauties of life around us.
I promise you dear little angel,
Just a few days later we will be together,
And never leave one another forever.
I love you my little angel.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 06 August 2009

Memoirs of war-torned bangladesh could be an impact here for 1971..... well written verses...10+

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Mubeen Sadhika 06 August 2009

Well written. Good spirit. Nice narration.

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Ejaz Khan 06 August 2009

All wars are terrible and should be abolished, so that no one suffers, right...

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Roman Petrov 06 August 2009

I liked this poem/letter, very moving!

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Ravi A 07 August 2009

A good poem from the ramparts of battlefield. Hoping against hope. Where is the place on earth where only peace prevails? Perhaps, in Antartica or Artic. Yet, this can serve a good inspiration for our children staying far away from the battlefield in hope of a re-union. Dreams can be given if not reality.

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Wesley Mincin 08 August 2009

Damn...good poem. To think...in a few years I just might be writing letters (poems) like these to my family back home. Good poem, Comrade. Easy 10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 08 August 2009

A frontline Medical man?

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Appleblossoms 2009 08 August 2009

For the good soldiers sacrificing their time and lives. Hope to read your next poetry re: letter from the daughter....

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 07 August 2009

A very heartfelt narrative of a father's letter from the battlefield to his 'angle'. A father willing to fight for freedom for his family...wars are horrible and useless for the many but useful to the few.

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Siddharth Singh 07 August 2009

nice description of a man being drawn towards his life from the war zone.

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