Let Your Eyes Cradle The World (Freedom And Fire) Poem by Ray Quesada

Let Your Eyes Cradle The World (Freedom And Fire)

Rating: 4.8


Let your eyes
cradle the world before you
cradle and admire,
as a mother sees all
possibilities, freedom
and fire
on the clean slate
that is her newborn child

- The landscapes before us-
symbols of our internal,
eternal, infernal
chaos and beauty;
confusion and ugliness;
eternity and timelessness;
-let your eyes
cradle the world before you...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
stream-of-consciousness poem i wrote in about 60 seconds - the only part i changed was that i added 'and fire' as the sixth line. :) -some days i'm just feelin it, ya know?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Sinclair 14 May 2013

truly inspirational... a wonderful angle to take... love that you stepped outside the box and created beauty combined in the most adoring manner

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Mimi Mata 01 May 2013

this is beautiful and genuine

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Unwritten Soul 18 April 2013

60 sec, A minute with a full glance in self mind and to sighting thought from inside to outer touch, your pen _Soul

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Valerie Dohren 17 April 2013

Very inspired and thought-provoking - 60 seconds well spent!

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Savita Tyagi 09 April 2013

Beautiful poem. Enjoyed it.

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