Let Us Show Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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I am loosing ground
As if nothing is found
And you are drifting away
Not willing to stay

This makes me sick
I go down and feel very weak
It speaks of unusual departure
That I hate for sure

You were destined
And defined
Solely for me
Designed and kept as free

It has magic pull
There prevails lull
You are at the center of attraction
Enough to build good relation

Let us try and mingle
And not remain as single
It is good for both of us
To live simple with trust

Let us show
And grow
With sincere design
And hopefully resign

Sunday, August 24, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

I am loosing ground As if nothing is found

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

Feelings and emotions Laura Forbes12 minutes ago I can feel the pain and weakness just in your words which is important. I like the way this poem is written. Good work.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

Love heartache dreams18 minutes ago A nicely written poem of love and it's emotions! You clearly made them known! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2021

Author Hasmikh Mehta welcome..Vinod Fullee

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2021

Author Ha Author H Author Hasmikh Mehta welcome.. Prasanna Mohapatra · Reply · 1 wasmikh Mehta welcome..Vinod Fullee Prasanna Mohapatra · Reply · 1 wsmikh Mehta welcome..Vinod Fullee Prasanna Mohapatra · Reply · 1 w

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2021

Author Hasmikh Mehta welcome ..Muhammad Abdul Wahid · Reply · 1 w

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2021

Author Hasmikh Mehta welcome..Trona Kiu · Reply · 1 w

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2021

Author Hasmikh Mehta welcome..Trona Kiu · Reply · 1 w

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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