Let Us Fulfill Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Let Us Fulfill



I feel exiled
From motherland for while
The blame war is on
The golden days are gone

Why such change?
All of sudden without seasonal change
What has happened to people?
Rape and murder that opposes or struggles?

Day time murder of political leaders
No trace of single offender
The system has broken down
The corruption is largely known

Find no light in summer
The patients only suffer
The children and old people seem helpless
Where is good governance?

Justice takes years
Normal men fear
When will they get reprieve?
Everybody feels deprived

Let us fulfill their dream
Provide two times meal
Let us not use words that are overstated
Poor people should not feel being cheated

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I feel exiled From motherland for while

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Golden days are gone..... Don't give up, they will come again 10 Jun by Seema Chowdhury to Let us fulfill

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Very strong Mary Musick21 minutes ago The poem is very strong. I can feel the aggravation and want. Good Job. Comment +1

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well written trevor headley20 minutes ago A very good insight into the problems of today Comment +1

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Government corruption and the frustration of how many people deserve more. Lindsay Hetrick18 minutes ago It had a good tone and ring to it, I like the cadence. Careful to not rhyme like words (ie change and change) The subject matter is an interesting one, however I feel more depth can be added. Comment +1

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nice Dez Marius17 minutes ago very inspiring

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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