Let There Remain Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Let There Remain

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Let there remain no doubt in our mind
Women are good at heart and very kind
That is how all legendary tales reveal
We are part of old traditions and certain feel

They have adored our life at lovely homes
At big house or hut they have always welcomed
With their hospitality and mild nature
They have made us feel proud for the future

Her role has not been confined to mother alone
She had been source of strength and always blown
In the direction very much favorable to us
With total dedication and devotional trust

I felt like bowing head to her dominant role
One of the recent happening has definitely stolen
Lime light and they have stood supreme
The sacrifice and stand has been considered extreme

Their second name has come up as surrogate mother
I have come across dealings on rent for commodities and others
But this has been proved as blessings in disguise
Smile worth millions to many childless families

She has always been in read and subjected to criticism
It has remained worst part in the history against humanism
She has stood all the times in favor of sacrifice
Despite all the odds against and much to her surprise

To bless womb on rent is something like unparallel
You can prove outstanding with class and excel
But to give birth of child on no consideration
Is something like birth of new and dynamic relation?

When will the world realize and give more importance
A real place of honor with full recognition at once
Even if that has been considered in return for favor
I consider it worth mentioning with full honor

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2012

Harriet James :) [3 about an hour ago · Like · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2012

Efe Light Sakpere Do u know that wen God said, ... I will make him a helpmate. the word helpmate is d same word Jesus used when he refered to d Holy Spirit as our helper? paraklet or parakletus meaning one called to go alongside wt u. the importance of a woman's role in a man's life & d society @ large is undeniable. 2 hours ago via mobile · Like · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2012

When will the world realize and give more importance A real place of honor with full recognition at once Even if that has been considered in return for favor I consider it worth mentioning with full honor

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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