Let Poetry Excel Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Let Poetry Excel



Good senses
But we indulge in nonsense
Seek revenge
Make no sense with age

Religious hatred
That has blindly led
We forget humanity
As blessed by almighty

We need no good words
But vision to move onwards
We have progressed
But not fully accessed

Only saints can perform
We need be only well informed
Let us not cu across
At any simple loss

Let poetry excel
To speak well
With no hegemony
But only harmony

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

Good senses But we indulge in nonsense

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

Great thoughts, well put-together Kent Krauss8 minutes ago Decent flow, only interrupted slightly by the typo in fourth stanza, but I did like the poem and message Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

Alyson Stoner Mike Brindley25 minutes ago she's a well going celebrity in her life, she did excellent job Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

Good Diane Corporan25 minutes ago I like it very much Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

good renjith sreenivasan22 minutes ago knowledge and wisdom. we need courage to cross that bridge

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

Aquired Taste Nicholas Moore9 minutes ago It is a well written poem just not the style im into so it's gonna be a biased review..... nothing wrong with it i just don't relate tp the material Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2014

cool Mohammed-Sunsung Abubakari9 minutes ago wonderful poem Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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