Let My Country Awake.............. Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

Let My Country Awake..............

Rating: 5.0


When the mind is set without fear
When the word speaks without lie
When the heart is free from dirt
When the knowledge earns without waste
When the hatredness dies without curse
When the love lives without trouble
When the freedom showers without crush
When the nature hugs without anger
When the heaven throws its blessing without limit
When the silent march forward to the freedom
Let my country awake.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 08 September 2009

wonderful abstract poem, well written, lovely to read....................10++++++

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Surya . 12 September 2009

vow! beautiful.it could well be your national anthem voted10 surya

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Lady Grace 12 September 2009

when the eyes of sleeping giant are wide open and the ears of mankind are close will there be any development? or terrorism will always continue...

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there is a poet in me! 12 September 2009

i like this one.... well penned.... it reminds me of a prayer we used to recite in school.... good job....

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Eilidh St John 28 November 2018

This poem is by the one, the only, Rabindranath Tagore.

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Eilidh St John 28 November 2018

I should have said based on. I can see that you have adapted it but I think it's inspiration should be credited.

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Eyan Desir 07 October 2009

Good write.......well said 10 points

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Seema Aarella 18 September 2009

Birds of love take to the blue skies, man and man gets bound in humane ties, truth will rise and triumph over lies, into such beautiful dawn of freedom.....let ur country awake! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Seema Chowdhury 17 September 2009

very nice poem written on a sensitive issue. thanks for sharing.

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Chitra - 17 September 2009

an international anthem...a wise prayer to live by...a 10+ for this univeral appeal

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