Let Me Thank: A Song Poem by Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam

Let Me Thank: A Song

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Let me thank my sweet mom
Daddy, dear Father! thanks.
Is this the world for fight
To reach at the chairs high?
Three lakh of sperms in race
Rushed to get a seat
There in the track was I
Who pierced the ovum first.
Tests in life test caliber
Force of Lord’s Will that gave.
Tested my strength of nails
On nipples of mom’s breast;
White jasmine five front teeth
Giggled while mom snarled.
Kittens and cubs in joy
Test their might in the fight;
Is this the world for fight
To reach at the chairs high?
Let me thank my sweet mom
Daddy, dear Father! thanks.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Somanathan Iyer 27 June 2013

A rich tribute to parents in a captivating spell. Thanks for sharing Mr.N.P

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Survi Sharma 28 June 2013

so sweet song enchanting one

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Dinesan Madathil 29 June 2013

Rhyming to be sung.. Expressed to be enjoyed. The adults in general to read.... A good share!

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 August 2023

Gratitude is the essence of all relationships

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 August 2023

An Excellent song TFS

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 August 2023

Let me think! I must think critically! A wonderful poem....loved it.

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C. P. Sharma 03 July 2013

A great song sung in filial gratitude with the science and art of being. I enjoyed its music and content.

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Valsa George 29 June 2013

So even conception starts with a fight and the theory of the survival of the fittest manifests at the earliest stage of life! An interesting write!

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