Let Me Not Your Heart E`er Break Poem by Valerie Dohren

Let Me Not Your Heart E`er Break

Rating: 4.5


Oh let me not your heart e`er break
Nor yet your joy to steal
For I would not your love forsake
Nor mine own heart conceal

If in my palm I held your soul
Tight-closed my hand would be
Then I would e`er your life extol
And keep you safe with me

My love will dance upon your heart
To bring you sweet delight
From you I ne`er will ever part
Nor free you from my sight

Forever you will be my love
Until all time shall cease
Together `neath the stars above
And after death`s release

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 21 April 2012

A fine love poem in an old romantic style beautifully crafted.

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Heather Wilson 21 April 2012

Beautiful poem, such a pleasure to to read,

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Juan Olivarez 23 April 2012

That is one lovely poem, great rhyme and meter. Excellent.

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Dave Walker 23 April 2012

A really wonderful and beautiful poem.

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Joseph Anderson 24 April 2012

Flow gently (Sweet Afton) -just a beauty.Not just another love poem but the real McCoy. Poignant and tenderly melodious

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John Brown 28 August 2012

Very beautiful words indeed Valerie. I enjoyed this very much.

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Patti Masterman 04 May 2012

A truly love poem; we human creatures are most mystical and eloquent when caught in the emotion of love.

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Ramesh Rai 01 May 2012

My love will dance upon your heart To bring you sweet delight From you I ne`er will ever part Nor free you from my sight very sweet. mind blowing.

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Zoya Khalid 27 April 2012

Touching....................really beautiful...

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Micmac Mccrory 25 April 2012

There is something in the air; all the poets are writing love poems. This is a perfect love poem a great write. Inspiring! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Micmac

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