Let Me Not To The Land Of Bills Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

Let Me Not To The Land Of Bills



Let me not to the land of bills,
How life there would be, wonder I.
With tranquil days and weeks of shy
Where tears too stand like tall hills.

Greed, proud be never,
As you're limbed with notes and engraved stones,
Love isn't greed-boned
That once I did even ponder.

Let me not to this hell-like heaven,
Hope, there would be an angel
With neither greed where evils dwell
Nor with the money madness of men.

If greed shall grow in this eternal platform,
To us we shan't reach and the men shall God become.

Thursday, October 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: greed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tajudeen Shah 16 October 2014

well, all do have the same thought in one way or other. greed has become nature of the nature even it seems, as she craves the mass's attention though. how sensibly, though not sharply observing the rules of poesy, have you penned the emotional cadence, causing the reader too engage in deep. well, keep penning to the core of poetic beauty. now, i would appreciate you sharply reviewing my two latest posts here, pls. rgds.

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