Let Me In Poem by Jonathan Maldonado

Let Me In

Rating: 5.0


If your glass is empty
Let me fill
If your soul is lost
Let me guide
If your load is heavy
Let me carry
If you cant believe
I give faith
If your heart is cold
Let me love
If your visions blurred
I give sight
If your world is dark
I bring light
But when time is short
Look at the clock
Nomore 'tick'
Nomore 'tock'
If your heart is open
Let me in
Then life for you
Will begin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 03 April 2012

I am always pleased to read the poems of any person whose message to me begins with, 'I have read your poem (name) , (comment) . IIt is only gracious to request a reading after having also read anothers. Thank you. May I point out that No more should be written as two words. A good way is to use the word-check in Microsoft Word and copy and paste to Poemhunter. Adeline

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Ari Lucas 30 March 2012

its beautiful: D i love iiiit sirr: 3

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Claudia Krizay 29 March 2012

A great tribute to love-

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Danny Draper 27 March 2012

Welcoming and generous sentiments, demonstrating an open and loving heart. Great concept

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