Let Me Hope Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Let Me Hope

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My dear nimble children
Listen to me listen to me,
You will be perfect citizen in future
Let me hope Let it be.

Have healthy food
And think high to higher,
Don't have noxious deeds
Believe to God the purifier.

Be away from nincompoop
Cuddle your brother,
Love your mother sister
Be merry, don't bother.

Believe that God is one
Do always good work,
Let me hope you will be light
To remove sorrow-murk.

Dear children let me hope
You will be best director,
Make a healthy society
And have moral character.

Tuesday, August 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: advice,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is a advice to the children to be a good citizen with moral character.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asis Biswas 30 August 2016

POET ADVISING CHILDREN TO HAVE FAITH ON GOD. BUT MY QUESTION IS, DOES GOD EXIST AT ALL.HOW CAN YOU MAKE A HEALTHY SOCIETY WITH TEMPLE ORIENTED BUILD UP. GOD ONLY HELPS CONMAN TO CHEAT IGNORANT.AS PUJARIS DOES IN INDIAN SOCIETY.THIS IS NOT A ESCAPE ROUTE AT ALL.

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Kelly Kurt 31 August 2016

If all parents would instill morals into their children, this world would be a much better place

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Christopher Tye 31 August 2016

Nice poem, I think we all hope that today's children can change the world for the better and learn from the mistakes in our history.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 31 August 2016

Good advice to today's and yesterday's children..enjoyed reading this poem..

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Savita Tyagi 31 August 2016

A father and a teacher's best hope and wish for their children. When children are expected to do good, usually they do good. A very sincere poem. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 05 September 2016

I am very sure that every child will cherish and relish the wise words written in the form of this poem, I wish all children to listen and obey your advice to scale the heights of morality and spirituality. Another outstanding poem, Sir.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2016

Let it be! ! And let them be educated with positive morals. Nice advice. Thanks for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2016

Beautiful message to all children. Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 September 2016

Believe that God is one Do always good work Great philosophy to follow and spread. Problems of the world will disappear and peace will prevail.

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Abduhoo Salamath 31 August 2016

ALL CHILDREN MUST TACK CARE AND WE HOPE THEY CAN CHANGE BETTER THAN NOW..AS DR. ABDUL KALAM'S DREAM..NICE POEM WITH LOT OF HOPES AND DREAMS.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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