Let It All Out Poem by Adryan Barnathan

Let It All Out

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(with a little inspiration, from Neil Young)

Now that I find myself
loosing my mind
can you feel my doubts?

Playing with the divine
you dangled it, above
as you lied,
of feelings of permanence

Facing me
we opened ours hearts
in trust, built on false honesty

Now that I let myself
love you
do you think I can
change it in a day?

Why did you hold love above me?
Did I lie to you when I said,
that I believed in you-
Yes, I believed in you

In the esctacy
of our love, we belonged
to a larger brighter world
both meeting ourselves, in the other
we were complete

Now that I let myself
love you
do you think I can
change it in a day?

Finding myself stuck
in what I once thought
was real, is now changing
and gone

I believed in you-
Yes, I believed in you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 04 July 2006

Young can be some great inspiration. i've been using jazz & classical lately. appropriate title, A, for a heartpouring piece. falsities need to be shattered, correct? to be realigned in truth. Sus x

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