Let It All Out Poem by JoAnn McGrath

Let It All Out

Rating: 5.0


Don't hold it in
Let it all out
Whatever the sin
Just give a shout

Holding it in
can only cause pain.
Reliving our sins
there's nothing to gain.

If you're holding it in
you're not letting go.
Cleansing begins
when you empty your soul.

You must give in
to the feelings you feel.
So you can begin
to live life with zeal

For it's only in the act
of letting go of the bad
That we will give back
feelings of happy not sad.

So......Don't hold it in
Just give a shout
Whatever the sin
Let it all out


31 March 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marci Made 31 March 2007

Perfect words you have put here, from your heart......there is no sin in pain, but not to release it like you have here would leave your sould trapped....So just 'Shout, shout, let it all out.' [another great song.] mm.(((())))

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 March 2007

JoJo... I Love this poem its like you looked into my heart with this one... I love people who are honest and speak with their hearts...10

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Just-another- Poet 31 March 2007

cute write... could be a wonderful write with a little tweaking here and there. don't an observation -its fine the way it is.

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