Leave Us Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Leave Us

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As our hearts break
and the rainbow falls
all we have is memories

Memories of a life
and a world
that used to be for us
Now it's for them

Them who
start wars and break lives
For them who sell drugs
For them who just don't care
about us

For them I just say
It's our world, leave us

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 10 April 2012

Very good poem dave my friend. Congratulation. I like it. Please read me.

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Briana Knight 16 April 2012

WOW. COOL i love it. i want more plz hehehe

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 April 2012

Drug pushing is a real issue in all countries, to the poor countries, it is a source of income, but for everyone including those countries, it is a contagious disease. Let us stand against this evil! Good Dave..

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Gabriel Gauci Maistre 11 April 2012

Great message you're trying to portray.

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Valerie Dohren 10 April 2012

If only they would, but I don't think it is our world any more. But we can create our own and hope that one day it will become big enough to embrace all.

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Eric Cockrell 10 April 2012

there are those that care, and those that dont... only the caring really live!

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