Leave The Hands Open Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Leave The Hands Open

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Leave the hands open
Sky may reopen
Set for heaven

May be rousing welcome
When doormen come
Lonely soul not to feel alone

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

Leave the hands open Sky may reopen Set for heaven

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2013

Mona Shakespeare likes this. Mona Shakespeare loved this 8 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

Robin Michaud less than 1 minute ago This is a beautiful poem! I loved it,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

Kirsten Aunty Kay Kay less than 1 minute ago Very we'll written but needs more detail but good job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2013

Jim Rogers less than 1 minute ago Short and to the point.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 September 2013

very fine thanks sir,10 please read mine and say something.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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