Leave..Never Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Leave..Never

Rating: 3.1


The sweet words of the silence when it utter...
the accolade of the waiting and spirits
of the lovers...

and the savor of breaking a virtue fast
which did last to the forever..

reward the waiting...
be the river

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 25 March 2010

again, u inspired me wth ur words...nicely done, promise...hope ur fine tamara..

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 14 April 2010

Silence runs deep...Tamara, you entered into its depth and came up with your voice again. a 10++

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Vinod Guhaprasad 11 April 2010

Nice soft words of silence that ripples in mind...

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Ken E Hall 04 April 2010

I take this as lovers savour the broken virtue rewarded by dreamtime by the tranquil riverside... very nicely put wrapping it in silence Tamara ++++10 regards

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Abhinav Baruah 03 April 2010

Really sweet sound of silent words.. Enjoyed!

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 March 2010

Reward the waiting, be the river, thats original. Philosophic. Nice thought and presentation.10++

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