Jesus James Llorico


Leaf - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

The stillness of the wind
Is all around
As I walk along
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Comments about Leaf by Jesus James Llorico

  • Rookie - 0 Points Geetima Baruah Sarma (10/3/2013 1:23:00 AM)

    Intense feelings very well portrayed in this splendid verse! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 8 Points Sj Holland (6/27/2013 9:19:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful turn of words:

    I knelt and picked
    A leaf in hand
    And it was simply luck
    That it's here I find

    The whole poem feels like a lovely walk in the woods, reflecting on a past that is not so painful, but still somewhat sorrowful. And this is nice:

    A leaf that brings
    The really best in me...

    Nature can have such a soothing effect. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (6/18/2013 10:36:00 PM)

    beautiful poem about the leaf. the imagery is touching. If I can write truly a poem in this leaf what a bonfire of poetry I can send lovingly. (lovely thought) (Report) Reply








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