'Lead Kindly Light' Poem by Valsa George

'Lead Kindly Light'

Rating: 4.9


Caught in the clutch of darkness, I quail
Seeing it shrouding my spirits, I wail
Assailed by afflictions severe
My life is now devoid of all cheer

Oh Light! Penetrate through this darkness
Let your beams cut through this dankness
Till every murky corner is warm and aglow
And I am steadied by that glow

Across the lengthening stretch of my loneliness
I see only frightening shadows of grayness
So come down to me as a prop
As through this alley, staggering I grope

Hold my hand and lead me to sunshine
With Thy brilliance, my life entwine
Set my mind free from the grip of fear
Fill it with thoughts, resurging and pure

So shall I go on my journey
With abiding Hope as company
And enough grace to make each day
Better than the ones gone their way!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A Sunken soul's prayer!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 04 July 2013

a good read. I enjoyed the write

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Valsa George 04 July 2013

Dear Dinesh, Your poem-Lead Kindly Human Love is indeed stunning! It has really eclipsed my original one! Why don't you post it on your page for the others to enjoy? It is so original that it cannot be called a mere adaptation! Thank you for this great honour! Let me shine in borrowed plumes for the time being.....!

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Valerie Dohren 04 July 2013

Beautifully written Valsa - the darkest hour is just before dawn, so be thankful for the darkness, it has a reward.

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David Wood 05 July 2013

A delightful write Valsa, let light shine through the darkness.

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Dinesan Madathil 05 July 2013

Dear madam Valsa, My poem is an adaptation with the status of a shadow. I cannot post it in my home page as suggested by you. I thank you for your generosity in complimenting my adaptation.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Caught in the clutch of darkness life thinks to get recovery towards light. Life does not like ignorance. Warmness of light gives brilliance. Pure thoughts fill in mind. We search for God with inner light and hope in our journey. An interesting brilliant poem is excellently penned...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Caught in the clutch of darkness life thinks to get recovery towards light. Life does not like ignorance. Warmness of light gives brilliance. Pure thoughts fill in mind. We search for

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 November 2014

This is very enlightening and awakening indeed......Valsa......scripted with heavenly words touch my heart indeed ........great write with great inspiration....10/10

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Hazel Durham 14 July 2013

A plea for the darkness to cease and allow the light to ease your loneliness and fear! I love this enlightening write!

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Kee Thampi 06 July 2013

green shadow of a Budha statue...... Hold my hand and lead me to sunshine With Thy brilliance, my life entwine Set my mind free from the grip of fear Fill it with thoughts, resurging and pure I love the greatness of this write and a loving heart of peace

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