' Late Afternoon Events ' Poem by Ency Bearis

' Late Afternoon Events '

Rating: 3.2


{ Terza Rima Format Poetry }



The twenty carat gold in sky
Slowly losing its brilliance
Likely to hide being so shy

Over to west in a distance
Hiding by and by as it could
As if in slow tick tack cadence

Just to hide in a day for good
In loath to hide luster outright
As it's mandated, Sun should

And a must to fade in twilight
As its role for the day is done
For the heavenly show at night

Star Sirius said; 'It's our time Sun;
Hide! We're here now. I'm serious
I'm not kidding, now we'll give - fun

and so the sun hides in darkness
Sirius and guests show their brightness



Ency Bearis
(c) Copyright 2012

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 26 March 2012

Like this very much, a new take on sunset. Very good.

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Neethu Prasanna 09 February 2012

It is interesting.You have portrayed Sirius, the next brightest star, as one who waits for its turn..Good

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