Last Night Poem by Kevin Carney

Last Night

Rating: 5.0


Last night…
I heard what I thought…
Were your whispers in the twilight of my dreams.
Lost it seems, once besides me.
No longer there…

I thought I felt the ripple of your breath…
In the stillness of the silent night.
Was it just a phantom of my mind?
Could it been the loneliness since you went away?
Maybe it was just wishful thinking….

As I tossed and turned…
Sleep restless, empty I feel…
The song no longer plays, it just has faded away.
Falling off the edge, will I ever recover?
To be right now so alone….

As the dawn comes nears…
I smell the hint of your perfume.
Lingering still on my pillow.
Memories, they are coming back to me…
Haunting and bewitching me…

I wish I could just let go…
To drift into silent sleep…
Before the morning sunrise.
It’s almost too much to bear.
Just to think about you…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence George Craddock 07 September 2010

Last night… I heard what I thought… Were your whispers in the twilight of my dreams. Such beauty and the beauty of the last stanza, the thinking of the lost love, almost too heart breaking to bear.

0 0 Reply
Riekairu Calo 06 August 2010

The way it express is very strong the more I read it the more it gets interesting a very nice and lovely work

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Kevin Carney

Kevin Carney

New York
Close
Error Success