Last Moments Poem by Devon McElveen

Last Moments

Rating: 3.2


I once looked into the eyes of a man
Who had very little time left.
Every step he took,
Every moment was savored.

His eyes glistened grey
As he took my hand and spoke,
'I'm glad to have you here.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 15 August 2011

Impressive! A few well penned and poignant words that captures the immediate attention of the readers! Deep and thought provoking! 10+++ One and last moment on earth! Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! If time permits, please, read and I hope you enjoy my poem titled: THERE ARE MOMENTS... Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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