Lapse Of Communication Poem by Maja Apostoloska

Lapse Of Communication

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Once it happens,
it may have been good (before that)
to lick our wounds
with salty words

and do it openly,
without imprecisions, in profuse vocabulary
(can be done in sequels,
but in frozen metaphors) .

I find appropriate
a formal denouement
confirmed second degree murder,
semantic infidelity,

mini-dialogues
and in the end, of course,
several insignificant verse crimes,
hardly legible.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rinzu Susan Rajan 05 January 2009

hey...you have a very distinctive style of writing...! ! ! : D

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