Lamenter Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Lamenter

Rating: 5.0


My feelings may not be peeped into
sufferings have made me their companion
words may not find the tongue
deserted me, have my expression.

Alienated you make me feel
a wound that will never heal
ditching me, did not affect me as much
your distrustful nature made my heart to seal.

A dropp of blood torn apart
Why? O beloved! You became treacherous
Who is at fault? moan the beats of heart
I should have died than bear indifference.

Appearance of comet brings bad omen
falling stars betraying my emotions
lightening that struck me in open
can’t endure with unreserved patience.

Whenever the fate ordain us to meet
never will complain, for I have you loved
expression will find no words to tell
feelings will remain unexpressed.
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copyright reserved by Tribhawan Kaul/2010

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 March 2019

Words may not find tongue but tongue helps in pronouncing the words. Appearance of comet brings bad omen and when memories are betrayed by falling stars this provokes thought. This poem carries brilliant metaphor and humour too. Many feelings remain unexpressed. This poem amazes us completely. This is an excellent poem very beautifully penned.10

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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