Lake Tenkiller Poem by Beach Girl

Lake Tenkiller

Rating: 3.6


Listlessly floating, reaching out
Fingers drawing playful aqua swirls

Bright, beauteous days of blues and whites
Clouds drifting, growing, changing shapes

Gently disappear in their slow journey
To a misty, mysterious grave

Nary a breeze, still and mean
Starkly, staring glaring heat

Sweet salty sweat on upper lip
Languid streams flow 'tween my breasts

Smells of sun baked road and gravel
And earthy, lusty, dusty soil

Crunch of rocks and broken twigs
Tromping roughly down the trail

Funky, musky dead thing scents
Lie in swamplike ditches beside the road

Flowers, fragile, wild girl weeds
Harshly thorned and twining

Vines wrapped about, and choking trees
In an endless embrace of love or not

Lake smells of floating, rotting fish
Mildewing, brown leaves decomposing

Silent sails glide 'cross glistening waves
Tacking to and fro across the lake

Low droning hum of nameless bugs
Sing mindless dirges through the night

The owl's inquiries, never answered
Lull me into sleep's soft embrace

Tuesday, September 3, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A frequent haunt of mine in the state of Oklahoma
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 07 September 2013

nothing escapes the poet's eyes and memory...you are observant and expressive in your description! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2013

A very descriptive poem. You have a beautiful mind and a sharp vision.

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Patricia Grantham 19 September 2013

Very attentive to your surroundings. I can just envision the scenery that you so wonderfully described. Reminds of my childhood days when my siblings and I would lie down in the field of broom grasses and watch the clouds and nature all around us. The scents dried flowers and still ponds was amazing. Thanks for the memory.

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Laurie X3 03 September 2013

This reminds me of a pond I'd go to a lot and just float on my back watching the shape of the clouds change. Brings back a peaceful memory. It is a sin that I was too busy this summer to make more memories like this. Thank you for sharing yours.

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Marcus Mckinley 05 September 2013

all the wonders of hiking, boating and camping by the lake. did you bring the marshmallows dear?

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Beach Girl 31 December 2018

Bri, you were visiting Lake Tenkiller, that's amazing! When was this? I WAS probably there. :)

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Bri Edwards 27 December 2018

oops! Lake Tenkiller. my apologies. :) bri

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Bri Edwards 27 December 2018

PH was taking too long to send this as a message, soooooooo.......... January showcase is ready to view. HAPPY NEW YEAR! bri (: ===================== p.s. my mate and i stayed two nights in Cookson OK recently, and saw Ten Killer Lake. i smelled the air, hoping to sense you there, but it was no use! : ( bri

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Crayon Poet 19 August 2018

It's like an elongated haiku that lends sumptuousness to your natural surroundings. Beautiful!

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Bri Edwards 16 July 2016

Funky, musky dead thing scents Lie in swamplike ditches beside the road............more than once, i have followed my nose to a corpse. no, not a human; a possum or woodchuck perhaps. this is a fine selection to again grace one of my/OUR showcases, this time in July 2016. it's been almost a year since last time! :) bri thanks.

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