Elliott Rosenberg

Rookie - 169 Points (May day / Lima, peru)

Lady Bug - Poem by Elliott Rosenberg

She flew past the snow capped howdahs,
Down the slopes of tears,
meandered onto a sylvan accouchement,
Encroached by a living sea.

Under a raspberry leaf,
Bonded by an epistolary of thoughts,
It is the pursuit of moksha,
That heralds her divine existence.

Now flowing at a natural pace,
Eloquently fluttering an elytrous
shell,
A cluster of seers accouter,
To douse in her ladybugs wings.

She makes no sounds,
Enamored with her truth,
Pheromones does she release,
Calling to the monks of Mount Meru.

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Form: Villanelle


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This Poem Was inspired during yoga. As a ladybug sat on Jessica's shoulder caressing her booboo making it better.
And so I wrote June 20,2015.

Comments about Lady Bug by Elliott Rosenberg

  • Gold Star - 44,743 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/24/2015 8:59:00 AM)

    flowing at a natural pace, good one.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 24, 2015



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