Lack Basis Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Lack Basis

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Believe in what you are
But do not go far
Away from people around
As you failed to find ground

Do not send proud signals
That shall show your dismal show
It may prove nothing
But self fallacy as something

No one goes on showing what he or she is
It is like humble trees
Where you find cool shade
That greatness should never fade

Where will tree go and prove?
Everybody may laugh and disprove
It is such greatness that needs no proof
Think of such thing when you are aloof

Neither life can be ascertained
Nor the stand can be maintained
If life is spent for self alone
It is better to remain in isolation as lone

No one shall beat drum in praise
As it shall be construed as mad chase
You may have music
But that shall lack basis

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 07 June 2014

Lots of deep meaning conveyed through this write.

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its about lacking stability Kameron WillisLess than a minute ago I think you should add more feeling and emotion. Comment +1

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kind of scattered Malishia StinnettLess than a minute ago Some of the word choices didn't make sense and there were parts that opposed itself in the same sentence but good message

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Gajanan Mishra 07 June 2014

lack basis, I like it sir. beating drum in praise - no use.

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Believe in what you are But do not go far

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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