(l) 6 (My Baby) A New Way Of Life Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(l) 6 (My Baby) A New Way Of Life

Rating: 3.4


As the nightingale sings its song
And the serpent slides into where it belongs
The fox after its feast gets up and yawns
The cuckoo croons and sings to the swans
I walk in the woods where the spring has awakened
The wild flowers blossom and threaten to apprehend

I ask myself, what did I do to have found you
What will I have to do to keep you, my dew
To have luck continue my way
You are my love, you are my jay
I dreamed of you and made you my reality
And then put an end to my duality

I love the sight of you
You have made my life anew
I live to see you laugh, to hold your hand
To see you sleep, to be your magic wand
You please me more everyday
Life has shown me a new way

O Wind, please continue to blow my way
Life without her will be dark and gray
She is like a vision to the blind
Solution to all riddles you will find
My love for her is as measureless as the sky
Will never let you go or I shall die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 06 December 2006

It's like nature mingling with your praises for her. (talking about your pincess i suppose?) . Lovely! Preets

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Duncan Wyllie 04 December 2006

She is like a vision to the blind Solution to all riddles you will find My love for her is as measureless as the sky Beautiful writing Love duncan X

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An absolutely enchanting piece of work, resonant with the hope and freshness of nature, which is so eloquently and appropriately invoked through this engaging, uplifting piece. Well done, TO. t x

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Ernestine Northover 03 December 2006

Wonderful opening line, and great lines to follow. Lovely work. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Patricia Gale 03 December 2006

Beautiful imagery, it lightens this cold weather we are having. Splendid piece filled with admiration.

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