Krishna Poem by jyoti saxena

Krishna

Rating: 5.0


Your shadow walks beside me at the horizon
it merges with me somewhere
outlines and silhouttes are substantialized
ready to be hugged
but you are also you
yourself and much more
you are the child in the cosmos egg, rolling in space
bathed and showered in the layers of colours
and sound and radiance abound
bewithching in your beauty
you are the smile
hovering
on the lips of my saviour-
the krishna on my wall!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharat B. Trivedi 20 July 2008

Hi Jyoti, Namaskaar - A subtle write with shades of divinity. A good read. Keep it up...

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It ends well if it begins well. U started with a divine touch. Good piece. Keep going.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

I enjoyed this poem and the following lines most: 'you are the child in the cosmos egg, rolling in space bathed and showered in the layers of colours'

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Vinod Kumar 20 January 2009

Great Devotion to the Greatest Soul, all included. thanks for sharing 10+

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Kee Thampi 26 November 2008

Emanate to a Godly feel, I love to read more from this talented poetess you are the child in the cosmos egg, rolling in space bathed and showered in the layers of colours and sound and radiance abound bewithching in your beauty you are the smile Young

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Young Insane 09 August 2008

luvd it......nice work....keep goin... check mine tooo

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 August 2008

Jyothi! ......you are Meera! 10 sathya narayana

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