, Knowing You Are There Poem by Louise Tredoux

, Knowing You Are There

Rating: 2.8


You are sweet and kind,
you make space for the
fears in my little mind,
you understand when I
explain, you help me to
overcome the mental
blocks that freeze my
thoughts, you take my
hand and keep me safe
while traversing obstacles,
you bring sunshine into
the black fears that used
to keep me immobile,
I smile and kiss your lips
in gratefulness, singing and
jumping for joy, knowing you
are there makes all the difference!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 20 May 2009

That feeling of being around

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2009

Sweet poem...lot of good will inside...good diction and nice format...congrats, Louise...10...

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Kinyua Karanja 04 August 2015

When you have someone you can lean on then you should call that a luck and thank the most high.

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Ramesh T A 04 August 2015

Beauty sways heart and the comfort if one gets from such a beloved surely life will be fearless and joyful ever indeed!

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Rajnish Manga 04 August 2015

A partner close to your heart will provide you strength during your testing times. It is then obvious that you express your gratitude in the most humble way. Lovely poem. Thanks.

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Bernard Snyder 04 August 2015

Very beautiful poem! Well written!

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* Sunprincess * 04 August 2015

..very nice...thanks for sharing ★

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Captain Herbert Poetry 04 August 2015

a nice, sweet and lovely poem

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Francie Lynch 04 August 2015

A trite poem at best. Jump for joy... deep!

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Gideon Arthur 04 August 2015

It may not be a summary of how ideal love should be. But having someone you love and care for makes a great difference in your life, esteem and confidence

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