Louise Tredoux

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, Knowing You Are There - Poem by Louise Tredoux

You are sweet and kind,
you make space for the
fears in my little mind,
you understand when I
explain, you help me to
overcome the mental
blocks that freeze my
thoughts, you take my
hand and keep me safe
while traversing obstacles,
you bring sunshine into
the black fears that used
to keep me immobile,
I smile and kiss your lips
in gratefulness, singing and
jumping for joy, knowing you
are there makes all the difference!


Comments about , Knowing You Are There by Louise Tredoux

  • Rookie - 258 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/22/2009 3:42:00 AM)

    Sweet poem...lot of good will inside...good diction and nice format...congrats, Louise...10... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/20/2009 3:44:00 AM)

    That feeling of being around (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, May 29, 2009


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