Knowing Poem by Sonya Florentino

Knowing

Rating: 5.0


She could feel his eyes

on the nape of her neck

She could hear him

barely breathing

And wondered if one can

hear a heart

And a soul singing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 20 July 2009

Very romantic. Two souls in tune. May the music never end.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

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nomad omnia 21 July 2009

Ah, it's good to be back, discovering the best new work on poemhunter! Nice one Sonya...I can feel the atmosphere...

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Laurie Hill 21 July 2009

This is so very sweet..lovely....

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 July 2009

When bodies and souls become one, all inner feelings become vocal. A very romantic piece of write, Sonya.

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Susan Jarvis 25 July 2009

So many emotions stirred in so few words - wonderful stuff! S :)

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Adeline Foster 12 November 2010

Great poem. Intent comes across clear. Adeline

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Duh Huh 01 August 2009

Very well done and said Sonya. I was barely breathing as i read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

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Surya . 29 July 2009

beautiful feel.beautiful touch. nice poem.voted10 surya

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Shirley Woods 29 July 2009

It's gorgeous - you can feel the air rise on the back of your neck. Beautifully done

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Paul Hansford 29 July 2009

A beautiful expression of an intimate moment. You leave open the question of whether he is aware that she is aware of him. Nicely done.

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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