Know You (No Love Found) Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Know You (No Love Found)

Rating: 5.0


Foolish was I to keep wanting more
point blank she shot me
tinman I am as I've become heartless
bang bang that thunderous sound again
murder murder like a vulture
she watches with a smile as i bleed out.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 07 February 2013

A heartfelt write, she was evil, pure evil Kelvin, hope you have found better.

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Neela Nath Das 25 January 2013

A unique confession! Right you are! At first, one should know more about one's loved ones then can demand. Superb piece!

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Valerie Dohren 23 January 2013

Sad, bleeding heart - another nice write Kelvin.

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Stevie Taite 23 January 2013

She sounds horrid! You sound a little indifferent, she sounds like she will want to come back for more but you have hardened to her. Got confused with murder murder like a vulture as they are scavengers, so I enter preyed that as been ing your foolishness had your hand on that gun, a struggle......: x x

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