Knocking Your Door By Carson Tp Alexander Poem by carson alexander
Knocking Your Door By Carson Tp Alexander
I AM KNOCKING YOUR DOOR 4 I am poor
As there is no 1 in my store to cover me with kind words
Instantly saying high
Every day & night of my life
I lay asleep on the bare floor
Currently crawling outside
&
Knocking your door
For a miracle 2 take place in my store
&
Some modern angel 2 permanently stay ashore
Longer than my 2nd mom who took an immortal tour
Was subconsciously now consciously sore
Wondering what u has in store to make me rich from being poor
I am knocking at your door
Very poignant write.Exhibits your dynamic poetic abilities.
This is very definitely abstract. You have done well to explore such complex thoughts and ideas. tfs
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 3:09:44 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Some good thoughts are expressed. I don't want to judge or anything but you might want to take a look at some Poetry Forms and the rhyming schemes of how they usually build up the foundation of a poetic structure of a certain poem...the massages are good but you lack a little in poetic form and patterns of writing.