Knock Poem by Jemima Rivas

Knock

Rating: 3.5


A knock on the door
Who could it be?
Coming this hour to visit me
Knock! Knock!

I think I will go out to see
Knock! Knock!
Because that person is knocking endlessly
Don't they not think I would be busy?

Knock Knock KNOCK?
Coming?
But why do they come
And knock on my door?
my feet are tired
my hair is not neat
I've got to find shoes for my feet
AND
I'm in the middle of a very special treat
Knock knock knock KNOCK!
coming!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 December 2013

Wow what a topic. I like unique poems. Enjoyd yor ratatat tat poem and i can relate to it. I dont like odd hour knocks. Super nice to read dis. Pls review my latest poem too.

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Majid Zubedi 23 December 2013

you're so lucky that someone is still knocking on your heart's door, don't be late, otherwise opportunities never knock again.thanks for sharing.

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Dave Walker 15 August 2013

Someone is always knocking at the door. A great poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 August 2013

coming this hour to visit me, good write.

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