Kkkkk.Autumn's Ceremony Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Kkkkk.Autumn's Ceremony

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There stood an imaginary
and invisible houri fairy
a bride under a maple tree
Dressed in prism-hued layers
of chifon in ethereal shimmers
and delicate gossamer
she having her weeny wedding in the fall
And fairy folk bustled about all round her
as flimsy and flighty as they could be
while red-gold leaves fell down upon her
in ceremonial nuptial
an autumn's ritual
and as nature's pretty confetti!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 16 April 2013

This strange bride under the maple tree showered by nature's pretty confetti is an alluring image! Enjoyed reading it!

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Saadat Tahir 04 May 2013

delicate imaginative and vivid like mid autumn in countless parks across europe nicely penned creates a visual liked

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2020

There stood an imaginary and invisible houri fairy a bride under a maple tree Dressed in prism-hued layers of chifon in ethereal shimmers and delicate gossamer..... brilliant beginning with thrilling expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 26 July 2013

beautiful imagery, beautiful words, beautiful poem very good works thankz for sharing

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Alvin Willis 28 May 2013

Hey thanks for checking out my poem: Lifeless. I like all of the descriptive and precise details of your poems.....Great work....and hope to see and read more.

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R.j. Wynn 10 May 2013

A fresh look at imagery for me, love it.

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Yasmin Khan 08 May 2013

Autumn beauty personified into a fairy....beautiful images from nature and autumn hues.

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