Kissing Conundrum Poem by Marieta Maglas

Kissing Conundrum

Rating: 5.0

If I had kissed you
With one word,
Maybe that word would have died
Inside you,
But I've kissed you
With all my words,
For you to be the miracle,
Who expresses them.
And if I kissed you with a question,
Maybe you would have pleased me
With another kiss.

Poem by Marieta maglas

Wednesday, November 3, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 16 November 2010

Reciprocal last two lines breaks the morbid journey through mist where one is simply engaged in kissing but no expectation of burning return......Fantastic word-kissing-project you have painted. Illustrated well the behind-word presence of eternity. When someone expresses ones emotion through poetic words, ones warm soul partly exists. Readers soul obviously interacts with the question quick, but kissing smell of the cool words sustains long of its presence with its warm, I think. Thank you.........10/10 Regards, pranab

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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