Kind Gesture Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Kind Gesture

Rating: 4.9


I may not keep pace and go wrong
I have yet to cover path which is so long
I am blessed everything for a song
Find suitable and honourable place among

Let my pillow be stone
Ordinary life and no throne
Let me find and seek the solace
Allow me to see joy on people’s face

I may not remain so long and forever
Little sympathy and respect however
I may consider it blessings and gift
I want only mercy from you with little shift

I must honestly pray and confess
Don’t shower me with so much bless
It will make me headstrong and arrogant
So much wealth and fame beyond the want

I want to remain in your feet and pray
Honestly living with not in race or fray
I shall spend the life for poor and needy
Shall keep away from cheats and greedy

Kindly lead me from darkness to light
Vigilant eye to find what is wrong and right
I may fail to understand your power and might
Bestow me with kindness, vision or sight

I shall Endeavour to be good human being
Recitals of prayers and worthy songs to sing
Respect to all religions irrespective of faith
I may bow my head……………………

May find your blessing even in failure
Ailing mind to have definite cure
Not to cheat others and attempt to lure
Double the efforts to make win shot sure

All I need is your kind gesture
Nothing in particular or bright future
It may follow with your simple grace
Infuse me with kindness and love to embrace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pitilosi Mdala 09 November 2009

I can see some kind of charity and kindness in this poem

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Vinod Kumar 28 October 2009

Real tribute coming from the heart of a Innocent child, nice work,10+

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Ramesh T A 26 October 2009

'All I need is your kind gesture Nothing in particular or bright future It may follow with your simple grace' these lines speak meaningfully what is needed more than anything else in this world!

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You have packed so much into this poem, but the greatest things to me of your kind gesture are to be humble and help the poor and needy. Also, to respect all religions irrespective of faith. I feel we are all here in the world to help one another irrespective of religions and to recognize God, and that to me is love and wholly light. Thank you for such a detailed poem hasmukh and for sharing your work with me....10 love Karin

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Lady Grace 25 October 2009

'May find your blessing even in failure Ailing mind to have definite cure Not to cheat others and attempt to lure Double the efforts to make win shot sure'...the last line is nicely penned..''double the effort to make shots sure'....so nice dear....there are so many kinds of gestures..the nicest is the kind gesture that u express here in your piece..all other stanzas fit and supports the title well...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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