Killing Hand Poem by The Queen's Dagger

Killing Hand



Why do you do this?
Just because he is different
and better than you,
you kick him down.

He is still a brother,
he still has feelings.
He feels more than you
could ever hope to.

He loves you,
no matter what you do;
that part I will never understand.
How is it possible
to love the killing hand?

Why do you do this?
He is just trying to live
and you keep aiming your gun
straight at his head.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This one is not very well written; I know. Still, in it I am talking about people who make fun of others.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Willow Moon Pearce 15 June 2012

It is a start Elizabeth, but too ambiguous and generalised. With age and more writing you will get over this and start to bloom. Good luck.

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