Marilyn Shepperson

Rookie (4th September 1949 / Hounslow. Middx)

Killing Fields - Poem by Marilyn Shepperson

The fighting is over, the battle is won
Overhead the crows are gathering
The dead lay like a grisly carpet
Those not dead groan or cry and pray softly
Worst of all is the heart rending whimpering
Of men knowing they are about to die and are afraid
The victors celebrate in the great hall
With drink and food in plenty
Raising glasses to the glorious dead
What's glorious about it?
The losers, in chains, sit bemused
Trying to work out where they went wrong
Exhausted horses in the stables
Stand with heads hanging low
To tired to eat, barely able to drink
But Man will always find an excuse to fight man
For freedom, for greed, for religion, for love, for land
And though those that have won are glad
Relieved to be alive to see this victory
Yet at this moment, the only true winners
Are the crows that are now descending.


Comments about Killing Fields by Marilyn Shepperson

  • Gold Star - 29,399 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (10/9/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    Love to the humanity is the underlined theme here and wars against the spirit of life and also dreadful. Great thoughts. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (10/9/2013 11:18:00 PM)

    Reality unveil in this write, thought provoking! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 866 Points Liliana ~el (10/9/2013 7:20:00 PM)

    Strong message; speaks truth; really engages reader and evokes them to visualize the situation word by word; sticking (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fiona Sandbrook (10/9/2013 4:49:00 PM)

    Watch grammar and punctuation, but apart from that it's a very vivid and compelling read. I particularly like the last line. Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,264 Points Xelam Kan™ (10/9/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    To (too) tired to eat......? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
    Picturesque and a saddened too, (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,099 Points Patricia Grantham (10/9/2013 9:09:00 AM)

    An excellent and potent write. In war there are really no winners.
    Even the crows and eventually the buzzards are the ultimate
    victors. There can never be any joy and if there is it is short
    lived. make peace and not war. very inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 940 Points Leslie Philibert (10/9/2013 4:06:00 AM)

    Not bad...you may mean too tired, not to tired (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rafael Kumi (10/11/2012 3:05:00 AM)

    great piece! Very expressive :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 156 Points Ronn Michael Salinas (10/10/2012 9:52:00 PM)

    Wicked! Good stuff. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (10/10/2012 7:32:00 AM)

    powerful write, war, the curse of mankind. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deci Hernandez (10/9/2012 12:00:00 PM)

    What a great way to get us to see the way of wars. that crows are the winner. however. it is sad that wars are necessary.: (. even animals and all the earth hates war. but we must. because of the enemy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Scarlett Treat (9/29/2006 6:21:00 AM)

    Your depth of wisdom here is amazing, in that you have painted such a clear picture of who the real winners are in a battle, the crows. The contrast of the pain of those left dying and the victory celebration is just great. A MAJOR 10 from me! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,885 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (9/29/2006 4:54:00 AM)

    POWERFUL PIECE OF WORK, MARILYN...FINE IMAGEWORK...I LIKED THIS PIECE A LOT....SOLID PENNING''''''''''''''''''''FJR (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tiyler Durden (9/29/2006 4:53:00 AM)

    WOW what an amazing picture this poem paint,10 for Tiyler, keep this up! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Darbyshire (9/29/2006 4:41:00 AM)

    Wow nice Marilyn did you see the 'fall of Roam' last night? ? hihihi Love dave xxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 29, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 28, 2010


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