Kept Me Alive Poem by Neela Nath Das

Kept Me Alive

Rating: 4.8


I was about to die.
I could not breathe easily.
He supplied words of oxygen
And kept me alive.
He has greens around
And open sky above the hill.
I started loving life
Because he has kept me alive.

Wednesday, March 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 02 April 2015

life is worth living again and again we all get it right write? right?

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Lyn Paul 25 March 2015

Those incredible words of oxygen. The want to live. For we must want. x

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 28 March 2015

He supplied words of oxygen And kept me alive. A good way of expression.

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Akhtar Jawad 31 March 2015

Listening to words of life, can perform many miracles. A wonderful poem! ..................10

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Chuy Amante 14 August 2015

at time magical souls do cross our path that we may have the eyes to see them or at least the ears to hear them Write for us dear kind Sister Neela! ! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 16 August 2015

So sweet comment! Thanks bro.

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Amitava Sur 15 June 2015

Very good to listen that with those words of oxygen you find life in it. Unfortunately some of us with the given pain and strife, do not find that even! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rajesh Thankappan 16 April 2015

Sometimes a simple word of love can provide us succor. A lovely poem.

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Kelly Kurt 03 April 2015

Thank you, Neela, for sharing your lovely poem.

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Bharati Nayak 03 April 2015

Yes there are so much in life.There are words of oxygen, there are greens around and open sky.God has sent us to this world to live life fully.Your poem is short and beautiful.

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