Kelbi Poem by Pete Crowther

Kelbi

Rating: 5.0


Wee black pup
jumping up
wagging tail
like a flail,

till I met you
I never knew
anyone be
so pleased to see me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna Russell 13 July 2006

Aww. I know she's hard work but I bet the wee cutie's more than worth it! Hugs Anna xxx

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Ernestine Northover 13 July 2006

A man's best friend - what more could one ask for. Delicious little poem which says so much. Love Ernestine XXX

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Ron Dragano 13 July 2006

So much said, so easily with my ears prickling and nose smelling the sweet truth of reality -

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Julia Klimenova 03 August 2006

I've never had a pet, but it's always good to have someone so pleased to see you, whether it be a dog or a man.

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Pia Andersson 26 July 2006

I know....they are really sweet..a cute little poem.

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Konjit Berhane 20 July 2006

well done pete that's why they call Dogs man's best friend i wonder what took you so long to realize it...lol great poem **KoNi**

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A. B. 14 July 2006

Nice, short, sweet, creative and cheerful. Loved it. Peace.

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Joseph Daly 13 July 2006

This is fantastic Peter. A wonderful piece that remind me of Bunting. This is so skillfully managed and plays so well. I read this a couple of times and I love the way in which you have drawn out the perfect words. People think that poetry such as this write themselves, but they can be painstaking difficult. It is not that a few word come to mind and they are jotted down. It take ages to find the correct sounds (not words) that will give birth to a piece such as this. I am in awe my friend truely in awe.

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Pete Crowther

Pete Crowther

Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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