***keep On Smiling.As Ever *** Poem by Dr subhendu kar

***keep On Smiling.As Ever ***

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keep on smiling even by the shadows
trudging when rigged off by the ridges low
yet the silence coos in the vale of sorrows
storm may come with the rain oozing of tears

heart seems to sigh of relief when slogged
soul still finds its home grooming in peace
subtle breeze may blow over the smitten look
rhythm still flows again exalting saddened blue

the repose when dislodged by the saddled rune
slowly night comes as unveil the art of passion
blood reels through rapidly the graces in dream
the peace in undertone still blinks to brace

time when fledges its colors smacking warmth
as you slowly descend into the whole being
dream comes true by the moment splashing
as sea overwhelms by the breath of full moon
skin spruces up again reshuffling the tunes

Monday, June 2, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Peaces 02 June 2008

Yes a smile simplicity in itself and yet a free gift of life makes the world seem a closer place 10 Chris

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Sandra Fowler 02 June 2008

Beautiful, Dr.Kar. Only the rare soul can smile in spite of all the difficulties. Keep on sharing your special gift with the world. Warmest regards, Sandra.

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Meggie Gultiano 02 June 2008

this is beautiful, Dr. Kar..

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Bharati Nayak 08 November 2015

Keep on smiling even by the shadows Trudging when rigged off by the ridges lows yet the silence coos in the vale of sorrows storm may come with rain oozing of tears- - - - - - - - Awesome beauty in words, theme and expression.

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John Oconnell 17 May 2010

Cpmputer problems. Cannot find Maiden Kiss. Above poem I find very well written, greatly optimistic and comforting. Thanks a million. John

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angelianne 1012 06 June 2008

nicely written.so hopeful.thanks for sharing.and thanks for making me smile.i'm sure everyone who will read this poem will do, too.10/10

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Seema Chowdhury 03 June 2008

dreams come true by the moment splashing......... this is a beautiful line. i hope it comes true for all to bring back smile that time and pain has snatched from people's face. thanks for sharing it with all.

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You've brought a bright smile to every reader's face with each line of this great piece... :) :) :)

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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