Keep On Raising Rate Of Beats Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Though brief and quite terse, Tamara, this interesting short poem gets it's message across to the reader very well. To paraphrase the great Shakespeare, 'Brevity is the soul of wit, ' even in brief poetry! Carl.

thanks friends..this was a love poem, what happen between two lover.the heart beats increase, then some how with dome mean it again decrease..it is a part of long poem will post it later..thanks

I can wait to read the longer version of this poem! I like to read poems that treat broken hearts. let me know when it's done! With respect, Abby

short but strong.... good work Amraat

sure you are able to treat any heart... paasionated writing iam waiting to read your interresting poem andmeaningful words+++++++++++++ with Shakespeare sweet

Sure poets are true healer …… twee… buoy … wonderful enjoyed Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+

Words that echoes the pattern of life back into the heart...nicely done Tamara

Where shepherds once were hous'd in homely sheds, Now tow'rs within the clouds advance their heads. writing credit...where due! The Aeneid, by Virgil

I again and again say that tamara dear is a good poetess with realistic approach and her pasion is to promote quality and sense of competetion...appreciate her.10/10

let it beat at rhythm and the rhythm keep on raising............