Keep Moving Ahead Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Keep Moving Ahead
Good beginning is half work done
Past is past and already gone
See that another leaf is opened
Golden words are silently penned
It is strong resolve
That solves
The problems
And overcome them
Nothing works
Than work
It must find
Good start of its kind
Man
Or woman
Must be equally enthusiastic
Bad odor takes place if water remains static
There has to be flow
And constantly go
If wind stops
Everything flops
So to say
Keep moving away
From the position
To form new composition
Good beginning is half work done Past is past and already gone
Matt G11 minutes ago It works, but it felt like a special message was never delivered.
Half hearted attempt to inspire the dead Brian LeeLess than a minute ago I'm about the least qualified to critique another I'm not sure my own words would be considered poetry it's just a way to release some of my pain before it consumes me. Seemed to be a positive message maybe a little rushed Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago give vent to your feeling dear... it is poetry and poetical language.. may be well understood 0 I liked it, just missing something.
Mitch Gundrum12 minutes ago I really enjoyed the differing forms and structures this took on, as well as the attention to word choice and rhyme. well done!
This is a really good message. Keep moving and don't stop because you will lose your place and some other may take it and run. Staying in the same spot can stagnate you just like a pond that has no moving water. Very inspiring.
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I would like to translate this poem
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Good beginning is half work done Past is past and already gone