Kaas Poem by Neela Nath Das

Kaas



meri safar
tum tak jake rook jaati.
Me jo rasta chun liya
wo tumhre taraf ghum jataa....
Kaas,
me apne apko
tumhra charno me sop paati..

Kavita,
meri har lafz,
tumhre har baatko
shoon paati.
Kaas.....

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Me Hindi nhi janti.Sorry.But, I tried my hand.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 29 September 2013

agaryeh koshish he to jaari rehni chahye, kyun k yeh boht achhi koshish he...Tribhawan Kaul ji is wise enough to identify the location by the dialect used here...very good neela! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 29 September 2013

Yes, I'm from Bengal.Ye meri kosis he.Pyar iss Bhashase, par janti nhi.Thanks, Tribhawan Kaul Sir and Aftab Alam Khursheed Sir.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 September 2013

Bahut khub Lafz kavita ki jaan hai kaas main ise samajh pataa nice lovely thank

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Tribhawan Kaul 29 September 2013

Nice wish...it seems you hail either from Bhihaar or Bengal. The way you have written hindi make me think so.

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