(k) 1 (God) The Divine Lover Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

very very nice, sweet poem Love dave xxx

This is just beautiful Tranquil Ocean, if felt so real in the read. Brought tears to my eyes infact. The two gets in the middle felt out of sync, a little too jarring perhaps, an edit would smooth this poems gorgeous way to perfect, imo. Thank you so much for sharing it. Oceanonic Diviner, Tai

great poem, R...the hindu gods are so human...naughty and sensual...their characters types are found in bits and pieces in everybody...love...nalini

Its just brilliant, you've presented them in such intense light. Preets

Radheya Radheya! ! Krsna Krsna! ! You needed that inspiration to write and HE (you know who) gave you the reason. And what a better way than to start the collection-list with the poem on Radheya Krsna! You are the most BLESSED one and will be LOVED for a long time. Radheya Radheya! ! Krsna Krsna! !

A great read and a good history lesson for me. Thankyou for sharing Tranquil---Melvina-

The Indian Culture has always facinated me from the neru, jackets to the elaborate craftworkby hand....this is a wonderful piece, T.O....IIt sparkles with the essence of Tradition &Spirituality...Job well done'''''''''''FJR

Great poem with well flowment of motion. I myself believe only in one God(The God and most holy father of Jesus Christ. We all have our own beliefs and heroes and gods. Hadda give this one a ten for being awesome. May any and all gods bless all poets-MJG.

Yes, I know about Lord Vishnu, I have read some stuff about it. Great poem, easy flowing! *~*Elya Thorn*~*

Hi Tranquil, It's nice to see you share about a different religions. My mother is a shinto, my sons are catholics and I was baptized in the Japanese United Church. (ha ha) My son Gordie loves to read on Budhism. So I am open to any religion. God is God what ever one believes does not bother me. I think it makes our world a very unique place to live in. Excellent Poem and take care.